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                                                    bad weather
bad weather can be storms,hail and some other weathers that can cause a lot of damege.
There are two kinds of bad weathers one is dangers storms and there is one people say for rain and hail.
tornados is a really a bad weather for eggzampel.
when I was in fiji i watched the news i herd there were lots of storms.
storms can be dangers.
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2 comments:

  1. Mrs SpraggMay 11, 2015 at 8:24 PM

    Wow - 5 sentences! Well done on giving us information and a personal experience. I loved how you spelt example too. Remember to use capital letters at the start of sentences. Great first effort Jedi.

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  2. Allan RobertsonMay 12, 2015 at 8:33 PM

    Hi Jedi. Great to see you blogging. There are some great ideas in your writing. I do agree with Mrs Spragg because your writing will have more impact if your punctuation is correct. I look forward to reading your next piece of writing.

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