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Thursday, September 22, 2016

Losing and finding friends



Hi my name is Jedi and in kauri we have been making stories on storybird. My story is called Losing and finding friends. Here is my story. Hope you enjoy...




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  1. Allan RobertsonSeptember 26, 2016 at 10:43 AM

    What an amazingly imaginative story. Is it hard to 'scamper through the island of moons?'

    Have you considered writing a story with your own illustrations?

    I look forward to your next blog post.

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  2. AnonymousOctober 20, 2016 at 9:19 AM

    Kia Ora Jedi
    My name is Kylah and I am a Room Five student from Awahono School. I really like your Losing And Finding Friends story. I like the way you added lots of detail, but something caught my attention, you spelled losing wrong on the cover, so maybe you could drop the e. So next time you could edit your story. I also like the purple cover that you made for your story.

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