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Monday, August 8, 2016

Super Simile poem


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                    Quick as a cat
               Nice as a bunny  
                Strong as an elephant
Loud as a Lion
Quiet as a mouse
                 Tough as a Tiger
Gentle as a butterfly
Brave as a wolf
Shy as a ladybug  
Wild as a fox
Lazy as a sloth
Busy as a Bee
Put it all together and you’ve got Jedi!

5 comments:

  1. You have amassed an interesting and diverse set of similes. I especially like the simile, 'shy as a ladybug.' You are a culmination of a wonderful set of attributes.

    I look forward to your next blog post.

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  2. Hi this is Ella from Papakura central school i like the way you said at the end Put it all together and you've got Jedi.

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  3. I like that busy as a bee analogy, that is so you Jedi. Good job.

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  4. Hi there, my name is Kylah and I am a student in room 5 at Awahono School. I really like your simile poem. It made me think of rainbow colours. Have you thought about making a border?.

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  5. Hey Jedi, nice poem that you have written and the one that you said that you are as loud as an lion, I agree. Just joking but you are loud. I really liked your poem because you made it stand out from your other posts because the text was very colourful. This reminded me of when I had to do that too, you should check my one out too.
    Looking forward to your posts,
    Parwin

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