Monday, August 1, 2016
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This is a great read, Jedi. You are using juicy words and phrases to make your story more interesting and the words go really well with the pictures. I am looking forward to your next creation.
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing beginning to your story Jedi I was hooked in by the end of the first page. I love the sentence on page 5: 'he found refuge beneath an oak tree.' Do you wonder why the King was sitting on the wharf? I wonder if being a King had made him tired and he was in need of a quiet rest.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to your next blog post.