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Thursday, October 20, 2016

Laurens birthday





Hi my name is Jedi, in Kauri class we have been writing recounts about the holidays. I wrote about Lauren’s 10th birthday party. Her party happened at Mega Air. I had lots of fun at Mega Air and lauren’s house. Here is my recount...


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It all started on saturday the 8th of october Billie, Ella, Holly, Bryar, Sasha, Lauren Rihanna and I went to Mega Air for Laurens birthday party. When I got there  I was greeted by  Billie, her mum lauren and mum.
Lauren’s mum took Billie and me to the counter to get a wristband. You have to wear a wristband so all the staff at mega air will know that you have paid and booked for mega air. In every session  you will wear a different color band.
Then Billie and I walked into a room where a whole lot of other children were sitting at tables watching a safety video to learn about the rules at mega air.   
After the video we were taken to the trampoline area. There were a lot of trampolines. My favourite was the half pipe. The half pipe is a trampoline with to trampoline walls opposite each other that you have to bounce on to get to the end and back.                      Image result for mega air half pipe




When our session had finished we drove to Lauren’s house for the rest of the birthday. When we got there we played pass the parcel, the jelly game and capture the flag.  But this is a different kind of capture the flag. Bryar





In this game there are two teams that have a flag each. Each team has to find a base and hide the flag there.


Then both teams have to find each other's flag that take it to your base without being seen. Before we played Bryar , Rihanna and holly went home. When we finished playing my dad arrived just in time to pick me up. I really enjoyed lauren's party it was exciting but I was tired.




3 comments:

  1. I enjoyed the extra detail that you added to your recount, Jedi. By doing this, you created a picture in my mind of what you were doing. You have organised your thinking very well - I can tell that you enjoy writing.
    Would you go back? Why?

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  2. Thank you for sharing your recount Jedi. You obviously paid good attention to the safety video. What was a piece of advice that you learnt from the safety video? Is Mega Air just for children?

    i look forward to your next blog post.

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  3. Kia Ora Jedi,
    My name is Kylah and I am a Room Five student from Awahono School. I like your writing about Lauren's Birthday. I like the way you were very specific. It sounded like you guys had a lot of fun.

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