Thursday, March 22, 2018
All about Amazing me!
In rimu this week we have been looking at different blogs. They were all great, only the blog didn't say much about the writer's or producers. So we decided to make a slide or doc about ourselves. Here is mine, please leave some feedback and tell me what I did well, and what I should work on. π
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Hey Jedi, I'm Shabeera from Waikowhai Primary School in Hauraki! I really like your blog post about your All About Me. This reminded me of my All About Me. Maybe next time you could add more facts about yourself in your slideshow.If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsshabeeraa.blogspot.co.nz/
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Jedi: I love the colourful presentation you have placed on your blog. I find myself wanting to know more information than you have shared. It is obvious that your family and your heritage are of great importance to you. I would love to know more about these and other topics that are important to you.
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Bula my name is Faith I'm a student at Waikowhai Primary school. I really like your all about me blog it's a very colourful blog and I love colourful things and I love how it was really easy to read the text. This reminds me when we did our all about me.Maybe next time you could add a little more info and pictures. If you would like to check my blog here's the link: http://wpsfaithc.blogspot.co.nz/. I think you were the one who commented on my blog anyway if it was you thanks for commenting on my blog.
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