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Friday, February 26, 2016




I AM JEDI...


I am an enthusiastic learner

I wonder if Mr M will give me a gumball for free.
I hear the noise of the class.
I see Enthusiastic learners.
I want a  free gumball!
I am awesome at everything!
I pretend to like school work.
I feel tired after swimming.
I touch the keys of my chromebook when I do my work.
I worry that Mr M wont give me a gumball.=(
I feel sad when I have been called a name.
I am lazy sometimes
I understand that I’m not good enough to get a free gumball.
I say we should do more reading.
I dream that   I am really
I try to steal mr M’s pen.
I hope to get a gumball
I am Jedi




1 comment:

  1. Your writing is strong and you express your ideas using interesting language. Do you really think that you are going to get a lot of gumballs from me?

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