Okay, so you might all be wondering why I am posting about my school journal work again. Well, we actually have started a new journal…
And I haven’t yet completed all of the activities but
Here is just one. Based on the story Hushed by Paul Mason…
I hope you enjoy reading my work, please leave a comment down below and tell me what you enjoyed. Or even if you just wanted to hear more,
Hushed is a great story. And I know many of you would enjoy it.
P.s I would suggest putting the slide in full screen to witness some awesome animation!
Kia Ora Jedi
ReplyDeleteMy name is Emil and I'm a year seven at grey main school. I really like this blog post and how you've included your own language.
My favourite word has to be onomatopoeia. Maybe next time just go through it a couple of times because I did see a mistake. Keep up the incredible work Jedi!
Emil
Kia ora Emil,
ReplyDeletethanks so much for commenting! I enjoyed reading your comment, although I didn't get one little bit of it. The part where you said what your favorite part was. What did you mean by that? Because I don't remember any onomatopoeia being mentioned.
Thanks for taking time to comment Emil!
Jedi ｡◕ ‿ ◕｡