Three thrilling comments😃

WLJ- Activity 11

Kia Ora,

Today I have decided not to write my intro but to put it into a video. I have made this video on biteable, which is a free to use site, where you can make awesome videos. You should totally try it out,  but for now. I hope you enjoy watching ≧◡≦...

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To Amelia-

Hey Amelia,

it's Jedi here from Rimu class ( If you didn't know, I'm in your classroom ◠‿◠ ). It's great to see that you are participating in the Winter Learning Journey. I can see that it is going well for you so far. 

I love this post because:

You have added pictures, displayed this task creatively, you have made everything easy to read. And you have written a description. That's super awesome 👍.

Although to make this post better I think you should maybe rewrite the description. Because not every reader might get why you are posting this. Even though I do (Because I am participating in WLJ as well, and have seen that this is activity 17).

Also, I was wondering, how come you chose a Cat and an Ant? Are any of these your favourite animals or insect?

Keep up the great work Amelia!

Jedi(づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

To Jonathon-

Kia Ora Jonathon,

My name is Jedi and I am a year eight in rimu class ( as you might know). I think this post is super awesome! Because you have written an Introduction and added a picture of the Phoenixes you have drawn. Did you draw these yourself? Because they are super good! Although I did have the same question as Mia. Isn't a Phoenix a mythical bird, not a dragon?

I also agree with Mia an Amelia. To really knock people's socks off you should add more detail. Maybe a diagram would be a great thing to add.

Great job Jonathon!

Jedi👍

To Mia-

Wow!

Kia ora Mia,
It's awesome to see that you are participating in the winter learning journey. I love this post about the Birnny, it's funny because when I was looking through the W.L.J activities and saw this task. I thought of you because this seems like something you would enjoy doing.

I love how you have explained the Birnny in a creative way. Although I have two questions, the first one is. How did you manage to get a canva on your blog? I thought it was impossible. Also How come you chose a bunny and a bird? Are the significant in any way?

From your curious friend
Jedi🤔